Daily Prompt: club

Part of new stuff I re-wrote this month to make the novel better. I have grown a lot as a person since I first wrote this trilogy in 2005-2006. I feel the changes make the book far better. Of course most of you will never now what was changed. But hey, take my word for it, it is better.

From Protector of the Grey House:

She shook her head. “No, this is part of the last few days.” She turned to regard him as she leaned against the wall by the window. She crossed her arms. “I found my way into the private area. I wanted information on Vincent and knew he spent his time there while in the club. I spoke to many people, including you.”

As she spoke as he shook his head. “You weren’t that memorable.”

She gave a short, almost inaudible laugh. “I hypnotized you.”

He stared at her as the news sank into his mind. He shook his head once, and tried to continue the conversation. “What does that have to do with anything?”

“Do you believe me?”

“I’m not sure I do.”

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